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这是原文:
现代技术的进步以计算机技术的进步为代表。不断革新的计算机技术, 从各个层面上影响着、引导着各行各业的技术更新。基于计算机技术的虚拟仪器系统技术正以其不可逆转的力量推动着测控技术的革命。虚拟仪器系统的概念不仅推进了以仪器为基础的测控系统的改造, 同时也影响着以数据采集为主的测控系统传统构造方法的进化。虚拟仪器的出现, 彻底改变了传统的仪器观, 开辟了测试计量技术的新纪元。本论文阐述虚拟仪器的概念、发展现状及其前景。介绍了LabVIEW 的功能与使用方法。并用它制作了示波器，函数波形发生器，频谱分析仪等基本应用，并在最后得出了虚拟仪器相对于传统仪器的优势所在。
本文采用虚拟仪器技术中应用最广泛、功能最强大的LabVIEW 8.2软件设计。虚拟仪器相对传统仪器，具有编程直观简单，易于操作；价格、开发和维护费较低；功能用户自定义并可扩展；技术更新周期短；可网络化测试等优点。
虚拟仪器技术作为计算机技术与仪器技术相结合的创新技术，应用前景十分广泛。目前，虚拟仪器在实验教学、科学研究、远程教育中发挥着巨大的作用。利用虚拟仪器构建虚拟实验室被认为是有广阔前景的事业。现在，虚拟仪器技术在发达国家的应用已非常普及，而我国基本上还处于传统测试仪器与计算机互相分离的状态。因此，从引进国外先进的虚拟仪器技术和产品人手，大力推广虚拟仪器的应用，无论对加速发展我国自己的电子仪器工业，还是提高我国的测试技术水平都是极其有益的
这是GOOGLE译文:
Modern technological advances in computer technology, represented progress. Innovation in computer technology, from all levels of impact, guiding the technological upgrading of various sectors. Based on computer technology of virtual instrument systems ....
由于字数限制，英文略掉了一些
GOOGLE翻译很牛,但还是会存在错误
希望哪位达人帮我修正下

翻的好的，另加100-200分

问题补充：1楼用的是YAHOO翻译，那个错的可能会更多．

就没人用脑子把这些翻译修正一下吗？

The computer technology represents development in modern technology. The ever-evolving computer technology helps revolutionize every aspect of production techniques in every other field. The virtual instrument technology that based on computer technology now is promoting reforms on measurement and control technology by the powerful force. The concept of virtual instrument technology not only promotes the improvement of measurement and control system based on instruments, but also affects the revolution of the traditional structure method of monitoring and control system with mainly data collection. The emergence of virtual instrument, completely changed the idea of the traditional instrument, opened a new era of measurement and control technology. This paper includes introducing of the concept of virtual instrument technology and bus technology, summarizing of the characteristics and application of virtual instrument, discussing of the current situation and prospects of its development, introducing of the function and application method of LabVIEW and use it to produce oscilloscopes, function waveform. generators, spectrum analyzers, and other basic applications, and in the final draw of the virtual instrument in relation to the advantages of traditional instruments.
This paper is designed by LabVIEW8.2 CN software which is used most extensive and with the most powerful function in virtual instrument technology field. This version is LabVIEW 20th anniversary commemorative edition which is produced in August 2006, it is a newer version at present. The virtual Instrument technology has the following features compared with traditional instrument: Enrich and reinforce the function of traditional instrument; Give prominence to the concept “The software is the instrument”; The instrument is defined by users; The industry standard is open; It is convenient for composing complicated testing system; Fine economic efficiency; Technical updating is fast; Be reusable and can realize network testing. All these features are the advantages of virtual technology compared with traditional instrument.
The rise of virtual instrument is a revolution in measuring instrument technology, is a new milestone in the field of instrument. It makes measurement of modern control system more flexible, more economical and more powerful. Whether measuring, testing, measurement or industrial process control and analysis, or involve more extensive measurement and control of other areas, selection of virtual instruments is the ideal solution. At present, the virtual instrument technology has been widely used and play a great role in electronics industry, machinery manufacturing, telecommunications, automobile manufacturing, biotechnology, medicine, chemical industry, scientific research, military, education and other fields,.

Modern technology's progress take computer technology's progress as representative.Innovates unceasingly the computer technology, affects from each stratification plane, is guiding various trades and occupations' technical renewal.Is impelling based on computer technology's hypothesized instrument system technology by its irreversible strength to observe and control technical the revolution.The hypothesized instrument system's concept not only advanced take the instrument as the foundation observation system's transformation, simultaneously is also affecting by the data acquisition observation system tradition structure method evolution primarily.The hypothesized instrument's appearance, about face tradition's meter bearing, opened the test Measurement Technique epoch.Present paper elaboration hypothesized instrument's concept, development present situation and prospect.Introduced the LabVIEW function and the application method.And has manufactured the oscilloscope with it, the function profile generator, the spectrum analyzer and so on basic application, and was obtaining the hypothesized instrument to be opposite finally in the traditional instrument's superiority is.
This article uses in the hypothesized instrument technology to apply is most widespread, the function most formidable LabVIEW 8.2 software designs.The hypothesized instrument relative tradition instrument, has the programming intuitively simple, the simplify operation; The price, the development and the maintenance expense are low; The function user and may expand from the definition; The technology update cycle is short; May network merits and so on test.
The hypothesized instrument technology the innovation technology which unifies as the computer technology and the instrument technology, the application prospect is very widespread.At present, the hypothesized instrument in the experiment teaching, the scientific research, the distance learning is playing the huge role.Uses the hypothesized instrument construction hypothesized laboratory to consider that has the broad prospects enterprise.Now, the hypothesized instrument technology has been popular in developed country's application, but our country basically is also at the condition which the tradition measuring instrument and the computer separate mutually.Therefore, from the introduction overseas advanced hypothesized instrument technology and the product manpower, promotes the hypothesized instrument's application vigorously, regardless to accelerates to develop our country own electronic instrumentation industry, raises our country's test technical level is extremely beneficial .

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自己也想帮你好好看下
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